Cold Lid

June
5th

By: big jonny at 9:29 pm

Comments: 5 responses

Categories: Poetry

Cold Lid

This toilet seat lid
is far from comfortable
as I stare down at the patterns
in the linoleum hall bath
trying to reel in the fading wisps
of the last great poem I wrote in my sleep
and lost in my consciousness.


Comments

5 Responses to “Cold Lid”

  1. John on June 5th, 2008 10:46 pm

    That’s great shitty poetry.

  2. Roly on June 6th, 2008 2:27 am

    Oh toilet seat
    I feel complete
    When I’m mid poo
    I like to hug you.

  3. bikepunk on June 6th, 2008 2:59 am

    Would this be categorised as ‘Poo-etry” ?

  4. Land Locked on June 6th, 2008 5:14 am

    Ah yes, the “advantages” of home schooling. My cousin decided to home school her kids. Her credentials include repeating a grade in grade school, being a marginal high school student then getting a degree in graphic design. I’m sure that her pastor husband could fill in the gaps.

  5. CMC on June 6th, 2008 6:13 am

    This is indulgent crap.

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