The best

April
17th

By: big jonnyat 9:09 pm

Comments: 7 responses

Categories:Poetry

The best

The best poem
I’ve ever written
disappears
from my sight
and into the morning
as I rub my eyes
and turn off the alarm clock.
 

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7 Responses to “The best”

  1. bikesgonewild on April 17th, 2008 9:59 pm

    …saw a guy out on my ride today,
    as he was pedaling out to play…

    …he was all decked out in old school kit’
    ‘la vie claire’ all the way…

    …but i knew it wasn’t greg though,
    of that i can surely say…

    …there was no one in a suit
    with a briefcase, following, on this day…

  2. bikesgonewild on April 18th, 2008 2:36 am

    …in retrospect, my rhyming meter sucks…

    …but i stand by my intent…

    …pure unfettered yet deserved insult…

  3. Mel Storozynsky on April 18th, 2008 6:23 am

    Yes, my “greatest novel in the history of literature!” has disappeared many times in that undertow of waking consciousness.

  4. John C on April 18th, 2008 6:27 am

    Gone, like beautiful morning wood
    Consumed in the fire
    of your shrieking wife’s voice
    “get your ass out of bed and get to work”

  5. dafew on April 18th, 2008 7:41 am

    It didn’t disappear… that was the best I have read in a while.

  6. Joe on April 18th, 2008 8:03 am

    I am NOT FAT I’m a sprinter!

  7. Nigel Ashton on April 18th, 2008 8:07 am

    The words just hide from the light, obsorbed by the night, and saved for another day.

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