poem for thursday…

March
28th

By: Pineappleat 9:22 am

Comments: 6 responses

Categories:Poetry

Sunday Afternoon

We were laying in the warm
green grass of our backyard.
Sort of shaped like a right angle.
My hand holding hers gently
between our shoulders.
Both our elbows crooked and my fingers
brushing her hand, barely.
Her softness I could smell.

“What do you want for dinner?”
She casually asked.

“I’ve never loved you more.”
I quietly whispered
towards her ear.

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Comments

6 Responses to “poem for thursday…”

  1. Scourge on March 29th, 2008 6:58 am

    WTF? She actually wanted to cook and you blew it!

  2. Joe on March 29th, 2008 7:03 am

    Nothing better on a Sunday afternoon, then rolling the sweet green grass, oh, did i misunderstand??
    well that’s ok……………

  3. flagstaffist on March 29th, 2008 8:50 am

    how’re the hips, man?

  4. John on March 29th, 2008 10:13 am

    Mmmmm….tacos!

  5. judi on March 29th, 2008 3:07 pm

    AWWWWWW!!! So sweet!

  6. cs on April 2nd, 2008 8:18 pm

    more boobs please

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